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Strengths: Looks like it could be a good educational piece, with Beethoven and Mozart thrown in there. The music works in a slight contrast to the visuals, which gives it a more interesting feel Cons: Without a description telling us what you hope to achieve with the final piece, there is no way for us to understand where the interaction is, or what you do with it. Also, the sound is not on a loop, so it will be hard to get the 3mins worth of entertainment from it unless you put that on a loop for starters. Overall: Very hard to judge how the final piece is going to look from this sketchy draft, but the sound is very cool and upbeat, and with Mozart and Beethoven there also, I'm curious to see where you go with the final submission!

Strengths:

* Visually looks good - like the incorporation of Mozart and Beethoven
* Animation of notes really grabs attention
* The sounds/music sound really good

Weakness:

* Without a description I had no idea how this sound toy worked.
* Didn't seem to incorporate any interactivity from user
* Colour scheme very ordinary at the moment

Opportunites:

* Possibly include elements from other well known composers, ie Bach
* With extra visual elements this could allow you to incorporate the interactive elements you need
* Incorporate some more colours into the design.

Overall:

This sound toy has a lot of potential to be visually exciting and very interactive. I look forward to seeing the end result!

strengths totally bizarre, i like it. actually looks like something is going on, with the notes being animated in their movement across the screen weaknesses not interactive, or if it is i couldn't work out where to click. only one sound (so far) opportunities has strong potential maybe something could spurt from their eyes, because they are staring so intently. overall Will be interesting to see how the final thing will work, because the potential is there for something weird and wonderful