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Directions: Watch the volume bars hit their highest points. If they hit at the first marker, they equal 1; if they hit on the second marker than they're worth 2; if they hit on the third marker then...
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07/23/08
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07/21/08
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The simple interface is nice and clean, making it look rather sophisticated. I don't think the use of colour would add anything to it, but in saying that, it is a little hard to actually read the time off it. Maybe some dotted lines in the background that correspond with the markers could assist with this.
In practical terms, I imagine that having it as an actual watch would certainly test your eyesight and your patience.
Also I'm intrigued as to how you will actually make it tell real time, and integrate seconds as well, I will look forward to seeing the final 'watch'.
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I'm really interested to see where you head with this design in the future. Looking forward to seeing the finished product. Good luck.
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• Creativity in representing the time. - Original and creative, nobody would know it was a watch unless they were told, I like that.
• Production values of the visual content. - Not particularly striking, lacking in colour. Does have a simplistic, uncluttered look to it.
• An accurate representation of the time. - Accurately represents the time given, minus seconds. Looking forward to seeing it with full coding to reflect system time. Seconds would make it more accurate though.
Suggestions: Some colour in the interface would be nice. Also a seconds representation would help with the accuracy. I like the originality, good basis to grow the idea.
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White hat: Doesn't work in real time but the animation give us the idea on how it works. Instruction took me a bit to understand but I ended up figuring them out by myself.
Red hat: Looks a bit plain on first impressions but the idea is cool (how the bars keep moving up and down).
Black hat: doesn't pop out, looks very basic, needs maybe colour, interface is hard to read at first and I kept loosing count as the bars moved up and down to quick
Yellow hat: Its works and tells the time, the basic idea is there and has potential to be better.
Green hat: The basic concept and creativity is in the project, it just needs to be reinforced.
Blue hat: I haven't seen anything like it and the idea on how the watch tells the time appeals to me but it is too basic at this point.