Now Playing: TokyoFlash Clock Draft
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Experimental Clock inspired by those at TokyoFlash.com. Basically the hours count upwards on the left hand side, the minutes count across on the right hand side and the seconds count up the middle. ...
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Flash, 2D Experimental, Educational Tags:More animations from WeaponX |
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07/23/08
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07/27/08
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Pros: the clock is easy to read and has a simplistic interface which is great.The scripting is working so your technical design is good. because of its simplistic design it would be great for younger people because there is no way to confuse the time.
Cons: visually there is something missing, its is a easily read and understandable way to tell the time but some more flare would help the creativity of the design. no way to set the time and also no way to tell that it is a wrist watch. some people may find that 5 minute blocks annoying and hard to be precise but its not a big issue.
Recommendations: Add more detail and creativity into your design people love fashionable uniqueness. add a wrist band and a clock interface so people know they are looking at a watch. add buttons to se the time.
Overall: This is a technically sound piece of scripting and it does serve its purpose as a watch, but it would be better to see some of your creativity being put into the design.
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Red hat: looks a bit plain. Didn't get an instant feel of attraction to the clock.
Black hat: Doesn't look very fashionable, very basic and simplistic in design.
Yellow hat: works according to specifications and really easy to read the time without waisting time counting each side.
Green hat: has a really good concept and base line idea but needs to be extended.
Blue hat: Technically the watch works and a good use of action script but visually the design and idea to the watch is good but just needs a bit more work.
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Great clock! Very original and creative concept! Look forward to seeing the final polished interface!