Strengths:
• Novel interface, i have not seen anything like this before and i find it very visually impressive
• It is technically proficient as it already appears to work properly and is telling me the correct time
• The time can be told to a high level of accuracy
• Has a wow factor and is likely to draw attention Weakness's:
• The second and one minute blocks being a separate entity rather than integrated into the main cube
• Not a huge fan of the colours the current ones work but i think they could be tweaked a bit
• no AM/PM indicator
• Not quite sure how it would be integrated into a watch, would like to see the actual watch drawn in so i could get a better idea Recommendations:
• Integrate the second and minute parts into the main cube somehow, potentially in the black bits in the middle
• Instead of having it go from coloured to white maybe make the colours dull then get bright when it is selected. Conclusion:
• I really like this and my criticisms are minor i would definitely wear this however i do find the colour scheme to be a little bit different from what i would like. I think this would also be cool as an actual cube clock sitting on your desk and would definitely buy it if sold like that.
White hat - facts
It works technically.
It works in realtime
Its easy to understand.
Good clear instructions.
Red hat emotions
wow
looks really cool
i like it
i would wear it
black hat - negatives
could be uncomfortable to wear.
counting 5 minute blocks may make it slow to read
yellow hat positives
works according to specification
shows good visual production values
clear communication through image and text.
green hat - creativity
ive never seen anything like it
orginal and creative concept.
blue hat - summary
overall an original and creative concept and realisation
with good production values and demonstrated competence with flash and actionscript.
• Creativity in representing the time.
• Production values of the visual content.
• An accurate representation of the time.
• The effectiveness of the interface.
• Technical skills with Flash animation.
• Technical skills with Actionscript programming.
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08/03/08
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Peer Crit
• Novel interface, i have not seen anything like this before and i find it very visually impressive
• It is technically proficient as it already appears to work properly and is telling me the correct time
• The time can be told to a high level of accuracy
• Has a wow factor and is likely to draw attention
Weakness's:
• The second and one minute blocks being a separate entity rather than integrated into the main cube
• Not a huge fan of the colours the current ones work but i think they could be tweaked a bit
• no AM/PM indicator
• Not quite sure how it would be integrated into a watch, would like to see the actual watch drawn in so i could get a better idea
Recommendations:
• Integrate the second and minute parts into the main cube somehow, potentially in the black bits in the middle
• Instead of having it go from coloured to white maybe make the colours dull then get bright when it is selected.
Conclusion:
• I really like this and my criticisms are minor i would definitely wear this however i do find the colour scheme to be a little bit different from what i would like. I think this would also be cool as an actual cube clock sitting on your desk and would definitely buy it if sold like that.
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Great Design